Saturday, November 6, 2010

Glorious Tree - 10thDoM Under the Kiss of the Blood-Soaked Tree

They sway, the boughs, and I look up into the shock of leaves tufted against the sky. She is beautiful. Her skin is smooth, alabaster, with smatterings of milk chocolate and cinnamon dots scattered across innocent places like the bridge of her nose and the tops of her shoulders. Our lips mingle between giggles and words, and with her head nestled in the crook of my arm, we speak of the life we'll have when we move from beneath this glorious tree. Lying there, love in my arms, this is the world to me.

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They sway, the boughs, and I look up into the snarling branches reaching their angry stick fingers for me. Her skin is rough, alabaster covered in ruddy streaks of every shade of pink. I still think she's beautiful. With her nails digging in, drawing blood, milky white engraving cherry red stripes against dark chocolate, I'm jerked from her side, and there are screams beneath this glorious tree. Digging my heels, my feet tear against the rough roots peaking from the earth, and as I am torn from her, this is the world for me.

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They sway, the boughs, and I can no longer look up or anywhere I wish, for I sway too. Her skin is splotched and dirty and broken in various places. Her dress is torn and covered in mud, her face streaked with saltwater and dirt, her eyes glassed and bloodshot, her nose red, and her lips cracked and swollen. She is the most beautiful sight I cannot see beneath this glorious tree. As the breeze moves me, rope tearing through my the skin of my chin, blood sliding down to soak my clothes, there is no breath left, this is the end of the world for me.

9 comments:

  1. It is effective how you have presented your thoughts as the three ages of mankind: youth, middle-age, and old-age. Am I reading it correctly when I gather that the tree represents 'mother earth'?

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  2. Sometimes, my pieces can be read in multiple ways, intentionally and unintentionally...

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  3. Short and sweet, great imagery.Not sure I understand it but it's effective.

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  4. Interesting... I thought the intent was quite obvious, but obviously, I'm oblivious! I'll bring some perspective here after I see what others have to say...

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  5. I'm not sure that I understood either, but it feels like a story of betrayal. Her outward young, sweet innocence is maybe not all it appears to be.

    I'll be interested to read your afterword.

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  6. intense...good use of the muse

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  7. "...snarling branches reaching their angry stick fingers for me." Love this image!

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  8. I can see the stages of live... and a love, betrayal and sentence being carried out. The telescoping of each scene is well done.-J

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