The right key
does not hold
the qi you seek
On the left
there is right
And right qi
Vitality rides
on your say
and three days
might kill me
Or cure me
of life.
Saturday, March 10, 2012
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Autobiography of the weird girl...
I like this, Jelly. Its simplicity adds a lot to the message. Good job Qi-ping right in a leftish world.
ReplyDeleteQi? Chi? Not sure I get this then...I'm a bit shallow like that.
ReplyDeleteWhat?
ReplyDeleteha. no, i don't 'get' it, but it has a simple flow and an ominous ending...like it.
ReplyDeleteGeez, Jelly, is this a literal bunch or what?
ReplyDeleteI have to admit, I feel like you are talking between the lines.
ReplyDeleteCure me of life, please thank you smile.
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