Saturday, March 10, 2012

The Key - 10thDoM Right of Qi

The right key
does not hold
the qi you seek

On the left
there is right
And right qi

Vitality rides
on your say
and three days

might kill me
Or cure me
of life.
Posted by Not For Jellyfish at 8:58 AM

7 comments:

  1. PattiKenMarch 10, 2012 at 11:32 AM

    I like this, Jelly. Its simplicity adds a lot to the message. Good job Qi-ping right in a leftish world.

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  2. BainoMarch 10, 2012 at 6:13 PM

    Qi? Chi? Not sure I get this then...I'm a bit shallow like that.

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  3. JeffScapeMarch 11, 2012 at 4:50 AM

    What?

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  4. TomMarch 11, 2012 at 8:35 AM

    ha. no, i don't 'get' it, but it has a simple flow and an ominous ending...like it.

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  5. PattiKenMarch 11, 2012 at 11:46 AM

    Geez, Jelly, is this a literal bunch or what?

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  6. UnspokenMarch 11, 2012 at 5:39 PM

    I have to admit, I feel like you are talking between the lines.

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  7. SiobhanMarch 12, 2012 at 9:41 PM

    Cure me of life, please thank you smile.

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